Content Rating: Older than 13
A young boy goes on vacation with his parents. Pirates attack their spaceship, and he is put into an escape pod. He lands on Earth and has to start a new life alone.
Good for anytime
Reviewed it on September 30, 2023Very good can't wait for the next one
Good story, but needs editor
Reviewed it on August 29, 2023It needs an editor but enjoyed the storyline. Looking forward to 2nd Book.
Worth a read
Reviewed it on August 29, 2023Great plot lines, and would be even better if edited a little better. The cliffhanger at the end has me waiting eagerly for book two.
Reviewed it on September 20, 2023Needs editing badly, to repetitive.
Not for everyone
Reviewed it on September 6, 2023Plenty of content.Things happen all the time. Doesn’t follow normal punctuation so sentence reading slows down - quite interesting! A certain paragraph repeats endlessly, almost like a chorus in a song!
Good story overall
Reviewed it on September 1, 2023I liked the story but there was some repetition. Overall a good read. I am looking forward to another book to continue the story.
Find an editor
Reviewed it on August 25, 2023Good read but correct spelling mistakes and punctuation needed
Reviewed it on August 24, 2023pretty good
Reviewed it on September 7, 2023Was an ok read but nothing special
Reviewed it on August 28, 2023I like the story. I agree with the other reviews, to much repeat of each day. Get a little help with the next book, it can be a good story.
Reviewed it on August 24, 2023Needs editing. Good story!
Really it's a first (rough) draft ...
Reviewed it on September 17, 2023Has flashes of good story hidden in a lot of cut and paste. Desperately needs a decent editor, as all of the typos, misspellings and other stuff gets in the way. Having said that, I will probably read Book 2 ...
Repetition, the same thing, word for word, time after time!
Reviewed it on September 4, 2023Good God, this thing could half the length and not leave anything out. Repetitive X. 100!!! Also, punctuation would drastically improve the readability. Interesting story, but get a writing team to help with the problems.
Reviewed it on August 28, 2023I bought this book about a week ago. The title of the book is the best part of the book. I am about 2/3s of the way through the book. I don't know if I am going to be able to finish it or not. It is by far the worst book I have read on Bookapy. If the author doesn't have an editor that is the first thing that they need. It is very hard to read. A lot of the book just doesn't make sense. I will try and finish it. I do wish that I had waited for reviews to come out before I bought this book.
Needs major editing
Reviewed it on August 27, 2023The copying and pasting of paragraphs has to be cleaned out. Writer need to make up their mind if they are writing a novel, or a screenplay laughing.
Spent way too much time repeating....
Reviewed it on August 26, 2023If you had skipped the copying, and pasting you could have finished this whole book in 8 chapters. The only good thing I could find in this story after the 4th chapter was that the price was less expensive than most other books on this site.
one star is too much
Reviewed it on September 6, 2023what a waist of my money so repetitive of every morning and then the same in the evening very little story in between.
I can’t believe this was published!
Reviewed it on August 25, 2023This story is like a rough draft in need of major editing. The writing is juvenile and does not make sense. Definitely a waste of money!