(2 reviews)
$4.95
Comrie
by Cainneach McEinri
Categories: Fiction » Science Fiction
Format: EPUB
Content Rating: Older than 17
Sarah and seven of her friends are abducted, drugged and sent to an isolated location. Six months later they wake up. Sarah is the first to wake up to find herself alone in a very comfortable bed. She soon notices that her appearance is different and learns a bit about their situation. As her friends wake up, they find that their relationship is a much more intimate one than they remembered. When they meet Amy's Clan, they learn that their hosts are some of the surviving crew members of on an alien space ship currently stranded near Mars due to sabotage. During their initial meeting both of them realize that their situation is not quite what either of them thought. Their situation offers them an opportunity to follow a very different path into the future, potentially a much different destiny. Thus, Sarah and her friends decide to join the space ship crew in their effort to restore the space ship. There are only about 40 surviving crew members so their first step is to recruit people assist them in repairing the space ship. They chose to approach people graduating from college who don't have any living family. Finding candidates is easy, keeping them safe from human trafficking is more of a challenge. 2nd Edition updated Nov2023
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keller.kevin
No context, almost unreadable.
Reviewed it on June 6, 2024
Could of been a decent read. Storyline could have been good. Actual story missed the mark. There is zero context to set it up, very confusing from the beginning.An interesting comment as essentially the same story is rated as nearly an 8 for the free version.
i_m_nightshade
Author needs an editor that speaks English.
Reviewed it on May 17, 2023
I have only read the Prolog and find it difficult to follow. Words are missing from sentences, 'then' is used for 'when' and so on. I may find this is an anomaly as I read the book, but there is really no excuse for not using an editor, especially when charging for the book.
I owe you a thank you. As a result of your comment I looked closely at the published ebook and was shocked to find the many wording errors. While I am reasonably certain that I may have read through some of them, certainly not all. As a result, the book was proof read several times before publishing the 2nd edition. A different approach was taken in preparing the 2nd edition from the ePub. Again thank you for your comment, although I would have liked a much positive one. ;-) BTW, the free version is rated as nearly an 8