(15 reviews)
$5.00
Server Change
by Shaddoth
Categories: Fiction » Science Fiction
Format: EPUB
Content Rating: Older than 13
V:1.2 A pleasant engineer in the next century receives a package from his employers as a bonus. The Virtual Reality game that he expected to log into was not the one he ended up in. And it wasn’t Virtual…
And he was no longer a mid-twenties male but a 16 year old female.
Server Change 117000 words.
No Sex
PS. He is still only attracted to women. -Sheesh.
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dai479
Loved it!
Reviewed it on December 13, 2021
Everything I like in a story. Can't wait to read further adventures. Thanks Shaddoth!
jiecut
A unique take
Reviewed it on December 10, 2021
Shaddoth created another interesting story. A common premise but a lot of meat added to the story. A story that creates its own path.
Great world building. Makes you want a sequel to explore the world further. Yet, this story is also self contained and offers some closure.
dangfool
Captivating
Reviewed it on December 2, 2021
After the free samples and my past experience, I knew I wouldn't regret owning this myself and I was right. I had difficulty putting in down.
It clearly wants sequels. It seems like there was an earlier spot to have stopped with a more dramatic pause, but I don't know the whole arc and this is hardly a problem. It's like getting a book and a half for the same price!
The protagonist is easy to get behind. It's possible the shift from first person to third at times could be improved, but I loved knowing their impact on others.
phillipj
Book is a fun read with a great version of a virtual world
Reviewed it on November 10, 2021
Once again, a Shaddoth book ends before it should.
This book takes a very interesting (and IMHO a correct) take on a person going to live in a "virtual world" The book is a quick read (even at 350 pages) since I couldn't put it down. The take of a man in a woman's body is also well done with interesting takes on the differences between a man and a woman.
The adventures made sense, the quirky sense of humor of the main character works, yet there are very serious overtones.
The ending was slightly abrupt with quite a bit wrapped up in a few paragraphs. However, this book could easily be one in a series since (s)he does have more temples to visit and maybe a kingdom to take over :).
ah08010-storiesonline
Another good offering from Shaddoth
Reviewed it on October 17, 2022
As is traditional, there is no ending to the story. In this case, at least, there is a "tapering off" that takes place in the last three or so paragraphs.
This is a slice-of-life post-mortem transferrence gamelit story. The "twist" of the male MC being in a female body isn't used at all. It's just "I prefer staring at a female ass when gaming in ortho view mode, so I always use female toons and now I'm a dude with tits."
There are a lot of options for a sequel here, another Shaddoth tradition!
There are fewer technical errors in this entry, but the Shadster still doesn't know about populous/populace. Yikes! Otherwise, if you like Shaddoth stories you'll like this one, too.
dsdlls
Is that it?
Reviewed it on December 26, 2021
I'm not sure I understand why the book ends where it does. Evidently the Author just decided that he had written enough in that story and stopped with what would seem to be then end of a chapter rather than the end of a story. Disappointing.