(11 reviews)
$3.99
The Lost Emperor Book2
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: Older than 13
This is a continuation of the first book. Please read it first, as this continues Chase's adventures. Chase Tan Nguyen Reynolds was born 18 years after the Vietnam War. His father met his mother while serving during the war. Unknown to Chase, his grandmother was a descendant of the last Emperor of China.
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dydrmr1
Great read.
Reviewed it on July 7, 2025
Each story by this author leaves wanting More. This second volume leaves wishing for the next installment to be posted very soon. Bravo!david.dland
The story is good.
Reviewed it on July 5, 2025
Needs an editor to correct repetitive paragraphs(copy and paste), switches tense frequently, use of improper pronouns is confusing. Story would be much shorter if less repetitive.stuartwry
When a proof reader and editor is needed
Reviewed it on July 5, 2025
You need to get an editor that knows English grammar. Your grammar is extremely bad. You will lose reader interest if you keep using the same storyline in all your books. This book is like reading all your books over again. I hope you can accept honest criticism.randy.abbey
You seem to almost be there
Reviewed it on July 9, 2025
I like your story. Notice that was singular. Your works have an underage superior being, by different means, adapting to a new environment. They all are having underage sex. They all have a very set routine every day. 20%- 30% of your stories could easily be copy and paste. You could save a lot of space by saying wake up #1 or going to bed #1. There are problems in your writing that should be cought by an editor. If you can't find an editor, at least buy a grammar checker. While serial stories do not have to a completion of the story each chapter, books should tell a complete story.