(2 reviews)
$2.99
The Submissive's Journey
by Thomas D Jeffery
ISBN: 9798223427186
Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Format: EPUB
Content Rating: Extreme Contents
Rose is fed up and bored of her mundane life until one fateful meeting in her favourite coffee shop.
Ian has been alone since his beloved wife tragically died. He becomes entranced by a young woman who frequents his morning coffee stop, and their paths cross.
Follow their journey as he leads and guides her down the path of BDSM, pain and pleasure as they become Master and submissive.
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hanvanmeegeren
Fix your book please
Reviewed it on December 1, 2023
I reluctantly agree with xofdallas. Please check your book after you publish it. React to people reaching out to you. I think it can be fixed, but be warned: this is just a few pages and not ready for publishment.xofdallas
Incomplete and unedited
Reviewed it on December 1, 2023
The story has potential, and might turn out well... IF 1. The author gets good editors, for: (a) punctuation, grammar and diction); and (b) content, flow, pacing, etc.; and 2. The author actually publishes a finished story. These two glaring lacks make this one of the worst values in a story I have found on Bookapy. These are things I don't like to say, but they absolutely apply here. Perhaps things can be corrected, but I am doubtful.