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The Girl With Something Extra

by ahorsewithnoname

Language: English

Published: 2023-06-21. 7,838 Words.

Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary

Content Rating: Extreme Contents

Embry is not your ordinary teen, but it is not until a series of events take place that her true powers begin to get noticed, and then there's no turning back. Intermixed with hot scenes with her step-sister and boyfriend, this story is the beginning of a much-longer planned saga, one with implications that could shake the world.

This is not a story about a flying nun! Embry appears to be your normal, average teen, concerned about her small breasts compared to her older, gorgeous sister, thinking boys her age are goofy, and so on. What separates her from the rest of society is a hidden talent, a supernatural ability to help others. She can't fly, she can't conjure up a stash of gold, and she can't leap tall buildings in a single bound. But when the world finds out about her, well, her life will never, ever, be the same, both in a good way, and not-so-good. Plenty of hot sex, almost some non-consensual, but, heh, Embry to the rescue. If there's enough interest in this storyline, I will continue it.

Reader's Comments:

"Man oh man that was so intense. I hope you really do continue with this story. In some ways it so cool, but in others it’s scary at the same time. You did a totally awesome job with the story. I really don’t know how many stars to give this perhaps a great deal like 30 at least. Thanks………" (sc)

"WOW! Just WOW! What a story!" (ag)

"I liked it very much!" (and)

"A great story with some hot sex scenes in it." (sl)

"I really like this story! It was a lot of fun and the development of the characters, especially Embry was very well done. The sex scenes were very hot especially the scene with Tommy, Embry and her sister." (gi)

"I read this story with growing interest. I like that the ability is first described as outbursts of strong emotion. Your description of bringing life back to a body and healing a mortal wound is well conceived, in my judgment. The same goes for the resultant affect on the character.
The ending sequence is shocking. Not in the logical sequence of events, but in your willingness to end this contest entry with it. My impression is that here is an author with a good sense of direction and a firm intention." (ma)

"Damn that was good but really weird. I had no idea where it was going at first. Well developed. Hot sex scenes. Please continue with it." (jo)

"I really liked this story. Being able to heal was a superpower I have always dreamed of when I was younger." (sa)

"I did like her. I liked the fact she didn’t even realize she was helping/saving others, yet she did. Even saved herself, when her sister didn’t. Nicely done." (tm)

"An interesting story, about an "ordinary" person who has greatness thrust upon them, and how they handle it. I've been trying to think of what it reminds me of, but so far I'm drawing a blank. And you left us with a cliffhanger ending...I'll be waiting semi-patiently for the next installment." (mr)

"WOW, great story, it will make a great series." (bn)

"I really liked this. I love the Embry character. I think it's fairly clear mom and dad have known about this power of hers for a long time, as did Embry herself, but no one wanted to acknowledge it. The use of social media is perfect. I think that is exactly what would happen today. The sister's sex scene makes sense to me. The older sister was smart, popular, pretty... makes sense the whole football team would want to make a run on her. And her boyfriend? Well, really... who cares, he got at LEAST what he deserved. Trying to rape the little sister, he's lucky she didn't kill him. I liked the whole thing. So overall. Great story, plot, characters, character development, drama, sex, tension." (rc)

"Great story, I really enjoyed it and it truly has plenty of room to continue in a series." (fm)