The Novelist

good story of an ordinary man whose life goes off the rails

Reviewed it on May 3, 2023

Good story of an ordinary guy whose life goes off the rails

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Where's the beef?

Reviewed it on May 6, 2023

Stories generally have a beginning, a middle, and an end. This does not. It has a really good beginning, and nothing else.

This reads like rlfj started writing a story and decided he didn't want to finish it, so he shipped it right at the end of the intro part. The writing is good - up to rlfj's usual standard - but the characters are 1-dimensional at best since they don't get any development or backstory.

I'll say don't bother buying this one unless you want to send the author 3 bucks (in which case you can probably just paypal it to him or something).