A Gift from the Heavens

dano

I really enjoyed it

Reviewed it on May 22, 2026

Even with sharing the same style of plot lines Writer has the Hardy Boys Feel and I totally missed the point till now.
I think most good and great writer from all different walks share this.
From beginning till end I could not put this book down.
Like all his Books I await the next one.

A Fan.
Thank You

LB

Reviewed it on May 20, 2026

Your are getting better editing. But have the same stories just with little plot changes. Also why you just finish a book series ; instead of writing another new book , I will like to read book 2 "FROM ANOTHER PLANET".

mauidrmr512

Nothing's settled.

Reviewed it on May 19, 2026

Nothing is resolved at book 1 end.

mmharris160

Enjoyed...but

Reviewed it on June 7, 2026

I overall enjoy your stories, but you keep slightly changing them. Some of the other stories you have started had just as good if not better starting premises, but have not continued those. I would like for some of those better stories to be continued.

The last few, and it is really noticable here as the character almost seems a-sexual. He has desires and flirts, but then he NEVER acts on it? I think some of the earlier stories went heavy on the sex parts, and some were cookie cutter. I think reintroducing at least some sex makes the story more realistic.

Also, with his mind reading, I think he would get more random thoughts from people or if only when activated that he would use more? There are a lot of times things could have been resolved if he had just been reading there thoughts.

masterdungeon2001

I repeat of each previous books with minor changes.

Reviewed it on May 21, 2026

The character development is good and the storyline is enticing and satisfying to read once again there was no conclusion just a promise of something in the distant future not satisfying. I had that this book would start and finish or give me the opportunity to buy part two and complete my reading pleasure.. as it’s not, I cannot give it full recommended five stars.

Chatfield

Better written; same story

Reviewed it on May 20, 2026

This is technically the best written of the author’s stories. For example, almost no weird switching from 3rd person to 1st person. Only forgot the word “not” 1-2 times. Still annoying is the misspelling of Mercedes.
But plot, characters, and situations all familiar. So familiar in fact that the blue pool in the cave and the procedures on a cold table are introduced without explanation; as if the reader had read earlier stories and knows these mysterious alien beings.
Flow is good. The reader wants to know what happens next. And what happens is the same old.
And, yes, like all the others the story ends abruptly, with a vague promise to finish it someday.
My advice: wait until this is finished.

justducky772004

Same Ole Same Ole

Reviewed it on May 27, 2026

It ended very abruptly with all issues still hanging. Based on the other stories this will take a while to finish.
Same cut and paste issue as the other books. He still needs a good proofreader to pick errors.
I wonder when he will learn to fly without the plane??
Almost didn't get this book because of past issues. Now I'll be waiting for ever to see if any book is completed

i_like2_sail2

same story different names

Reviewed it on May 18, 2026

although it is entertaining to read it is the exact story plot as all the other stories. Genius kid is born, gets multiple college degree beforeage 15. Gets expert martial arts ninja training but only knows how to kick a person in the balls. He can read minds and like in all books there is a cave with a mystery hot tub that energizes him and aliens keep doing medical test on him and he never questions it and if he thinks about it a thought just pops into his head that just says "oh you got an upgrade" and he just shrugs it off like no big deal. He always finds himself in trouble with the CIA, FBI, NSA, Homeland, the Mob or drug lords. HE can make CIA and others disappear and take all their equipment and hid it without any real trouble. They just send a few more agents to see what happened and then they day and then another team is sent. It is an endless cycle of stupidity. oh and lets not forget he is a world class hacker who hacks everones computers and find there dirty pics and sends them to the wives thinking that will keep the bad guys to busy to come after him again. And then to wrap it all up the story just stops cold turkey and we are told by the author that book 2 is on the way but he has other progects he is working on. Well no shite he has 16 books outs and not one fully completed story.

rtwolfe

Leaves everything hanging

Reviewed it on May 30, 2026

Story line is fine but leaves out any conclusions to side plots. doesn't finish stories bad at least no one here had to have their bLls removed in other stories that's all that happened. Allot of the story is just copied paragraphs and reruns of prior stories. This is the last book I will buy until he finishes some of the storoes

computermad

Same Stuff; Different Title

Reviewed it on May 29, 2026

I'v decided to not buy any more books until he at least tries to finish some of his previous titles. Tired of reading the same storyline, unfinished as usual. I have put in numerous requests to the author to finish some of his stories but with no response.I don't think he actually has a finish mapped out for any of the books which is why he keeps rehashing the beginning so he can keep money coming in.