(34 reviews)
$3.99
The Mistake
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: All Ages
Li Lee was born as a result of an overaggressive football player, Joe King, taking advantage of his mom, Kim Lee. Kim was a genius and was working on her doctoral degree at 18. When Kim found out she was pregnant, Joe walked away, and his parents paid Kim off. Li was born with a disease and needed a bone marrow transplant, but Joe refused to donate. Kim, desperate to save Li’s life, stole a formula from a professor she worked with and injected Li with it, saving his life
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david.dland
Very good storyline
Reviewed it on March 6, 2026
Next book please.
dano
theme is close to being the same in nearly all the writer's work
Reviewed it on March 6, 2026
I am impressed on how many ways you can cookie cut a story and
keep readers happy.
I liked every one.
thanks for keeping us entertained!
LB
Reviewed it on March 6, 2026
K
Best book so far by this author
Reviewed it on March 4, 2026
While all the authors books are good and follow similar scripts, this one is the best so far.
masterdungeon2001
Very similar to prior stories.
Reviewed it on March 6, 2026
Just like his prior stories promise to add additional chapters, that never come . Stories that are never finished just Leave you disappointed, broken commitment is sad . Please finish one of your many half finished works.
jharmer
English Improved
Reviewed it on March 4, 2026
Similar to all his other books but with an improvement in the English and Grammar. However the author still needs an Editor to correct the minor problems. Still worth the money.
jh
justducky772004
Yet another actor is born
Reviewed it on March 12, 2026
I was hoping for a different MC with the way it started. This is just a copy of all the other books with a different town and names.
Cut and paste was much better but a good proofreading would have picked up some of the spelling and continuity mistakes.
randyisredeed
Completing the open series books currently out. Getting discoura
Reviewed it on March 5, 2026
Awesome stories. Every story is open ended. Dont play to purchase more until some complete to finish and close.
I am sure i am not the only one to comment.
Have a safe and blessed day..
computermad
Mishmash
Reviewed it on March 4, 2026
This is probably the best editing you have done so far, however the content was also the worst. This story seems to have parts copied out of nearly every book you have written so far!
cousins_bryan
The author has regressed to repetition like earlier books.
Reviewed it on March 4, 2026
Poor effort.to much repetition.half of all chapters could be eliminated
i_like2_sail2
same story different names
Reviewed it on March 4, 2026
Well I did enjoy the book, but it is pretty much the exact same as all the other books written by this author with just different names. Although this authors writing seems to be getting a little better. It is still the same format. The mc wakes up, does his martial art workout, has problems with FBI and all other agencies. Kicks someone in the balls repeatedly. Reads their minds, hacks their computers and phones then sends the naughty pics to the wives causing divorces left and right. Then the story ends with a message from the author. And this is the message.
That’s the end of The Mistake, book one. I’m planning on continuing the story, but I have another project to finish first. Hope you enjoyed it, and thank you for your support.
Every story that he has written has ended with a message like this. I wish that he would quit cranking out new books and complete the stories he has already started.
Ok that is my review. Like I said I did enjoy it, and it was a fun afternoon read.