(37 reviews)
$3.99
The Phenomenal Event
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: All Ages
Griffin Barrett was thirteen and lived in Granbury, outside Fort Worth, Texas. He lived with his Father, Richard Barrett, a chemical engineer at Allied Technologies. Four years ago, Griffin’s mother, Ashley Barrett, divorced his dad for the bright lights of Hollywood. Grif worked part-time at Allied Technologies in the lab and doing computer work. That's when the event took place.
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david.dland
Too short.
Reviewed it on October 20, 2025
Loved it, just too short! fiction
Reviewed it on October 20, 2025
very entertainingdano
its sifi
Reviewed it on October 17, 2025
its well worth paying forowendavid4230
It should have been longer
Reviewed it on October 10, 2025
Good story, and plot. Strong characters. Now what I want to know is when you will get around to writing the follow up books to your other serials. I'm over 70 so I would like to read them as well as this current one. Good writing but please focus and write faster. Owenpamed1979
Great read! Improved grammar.
Reviewed it on October 9, 2025
This stories is similar but better story than some of the authors other stories. Some sections are obvious cut and paste with minor edits. Main example: He comes home. Changes. Shoots baskets/hits the big bag. Changes. Laundry. Goes to his room. Reads/works on computer. Dad comes home. So it is similar many times. The thing is to read it quick to see the differences. Life is like this but the differences are what counts. Hotel stays and first day on the sets is sorta like that but more differences. With earlier stories, I was a little upset with the repetitions. Part way through this story, I got it. You have to look for the difference. The author can't just only include them. I may have to reread to fully understand how he changes as he grows. n/a
Reviewed it on October 9, 2025
n/a LB
Reviewed it on October 8, 2025
kjuliennegray
Repetitive
Reviewed it on October 25, 2025
Overall the story is imaginative and holds your attention, but the repetition gets old. I keep having to skip paragraphs when it came to working out or going to sleep. The author needs to consider using a phrase like “ Grif worked out on his martial arts” or went to sleep without a headache. Overall good story but needs work.
rod
Good read
Reviewed it on October 22, 2025
Good read until the end which seemed rushed.raeperson111
Another fun read.
Reviewed it on October 14, 2025
Enjoyable but desperately needs an editor!jharmer
Much improved English Grammar
Reviewed it on October 8, 2025
This Book follows the usual format for this author BUT the English is much improved. There are no major problems with first second and third person statments and very few incorrect but similar sounding words.. All in all a much better read! Well worth the money. jh