(30 reviews)
$3.99
Transformation
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: All Ages
Alexander Nathaniel Wilson Hollister was thirteen years old and lived in Southern California. On Saturdays, he and his friends played video games at the mall. After lunch at the food court, they returned to the game room. Alex was tackled by a man running through the mall and driven into a planter, knocking him unconscious. He woke up in the hospital after being in a coma for a week.
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173abnbrg
Their will be another book to spend a day on.
Reviewed it on September 11, 2025
I love the constant humour (English).dano
very entertaining
Reviewed it on September 8, 2025
very cativating reading.writer has a lot of common themes in his stories. this one so far I like the best and await book 2 The story doesn't end
Reviewed it on September 6, 2025
Repetitive passages appear in every book by this author. You may like them or not.gtu61297
It is a progressive book which is entertaining.
Reviewed it on September 2, 2025
Another book that I have totally enjoyed, have purchased all of his titles here and keep reading them. Many thanks Greg Tutin LB
Reviewed it on September 1, 2025
Cjimbo_p2
This is a great book
Reviewed it on September 13, 2025
This is a great book. Well it would be if you can overlook the authors apparent inability to understand first and third person; and also the chunks of repeated text at the start of every day. Ignoring that, which you should do, this a great book. The characters are great, the jokes are great and the understanding of human interactions are great. I very much enjoyed this book and was disappointed when it finished so abruptly. So thanks AWTM for this great book.terrired77
Pretty good
Reviewed it on September 7, 2025
The story itself is pretty good. Though the authors habit of starting and ending each day with the same few sentences can be annoying. Maybe it's to increase the word count... But the story in-between is very good!jharmer
A good read if your not too picky about written English.
Reviewed it on August 31, 2025
This book follows the authors well trodden path with much repeating at the start and end of every day. But what amuses me, as a former teacher, is the the spelling errors and switching between First, Second and Third person narrative throughout the story. If you can ignore these errors then it is an amusing read and well worth the pittance you are asked to pay. Thinking further I wonder if the author is using AI or perhaps some form of Speech to Type to produce these works. jhdenniscoffey59
Just purchased book
Reviewed it on August 30, 2025
This is a fun read just like the other books.Soundstage
Stories are fun to read.
Reviewed it on September 30, 2025
All this authors protagonists are Sociopaths, but the stories are Entertaining. Lots of autocorrect type errors (I'm beginning to wonder if AI is used), stories are getting better but still reminded me of the Philippines, I would say that English is not there first language. OR their really is an unnamed character close enough to Alex to always be with him using each other's tools, plan's and even each others life energy (Chi).Reader
It appears the author is not serious about finishing a book.
Reviewed it on October 8, 2025
Will not purchase another book until "Manipulator," "Last Emperor," and "Transformation" are complete. As much plot recycling as is done in the afore mentioned tomes, we should be seeing at least one completion, don't you think?