$7.99
The Rise of David - I
by RichXpower
Language: English
Content Rating: Older than 13
David Chance is just an ordinary guy from a simple family, living a normal life.
But one night changes everything. While walking his girlfriend home, David gets into a fight with Jordan Xiao, a spoiled rich kid who tries to harm his girlfriend. David fights back to protect her—but it costs him dearly.
David is sent to prison for three years. His family suffers greatly while he’s gone, losing money, work, and even their health.
But prison is also where David’s real story begins. He meets a strange cellmate who claims to know powerful secrets. Under this man’s guidance, David trains hard and learns amazing skills in martial arts and medicine.
When David finally leaves prison, he’s no longer the same man. He’s strong, skilled, and ready to face the world. But trouble still waits for him outside. His family is in ruins, and his enemies are powerful.
Now, David is determined to protect his loved ones, fight back against those who hurt them, and rise to become someone extraordinary.
This is the story of how an ordinary man becomes a legend.
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LB
Reviewed it on July 22, 2025
Need editing ex.David or its Kai.David Chen➨David Chance(Kai)
Nologic
good
Reviewed it on July 16, 2025
Edited version is goodfred7021
Up dated review now worth it!!!
Reviewed it on July 12, 2025
A very much improved story with proper sentence structure and grammer. Reads much better now! * Recommended reading !!! Written in very poor English, poor grammer, very poor sentence structure. I feel that for $6.00 I was cheated out my money. *** At least the author has done (is trying to do) the right thing, and edited, rewrote and made it better! THANK YOU for living up to your word.Thank you for your review. The edited version has been updated.
Ed
Still needs work
Reviewed it on August 2, 2025
Editing and chapters being divided would help. Couldn't finish.Thanks a lot for the feedback! I hear you—better editing and clearer chapter breaks can really make a difference. I’ll work on that moving forward. Appreciate you giving it a shot!