(16 reviews)
$7.99
The Rise of David - I
by RichXpower
Language: English
Content Rating: Older than 13
After serving three years behind bars for defending his girlfriend, David Chance emerges to find she has married the very man he once fought. Betrayal fuels his resolve, and armed with the Focus Technique he mastered in prison, David embarks on a path of cultivation. Alongside the radiant Josephine, his journey ignites old flames of jealousy and sets the stage for a clash of love, loyalty, and vengeance.
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r.gunter5
Well worth the time to read this
Reviewed it on September 13, 2025
G'day mates I NOW have to get the next book as I am hooked on this great story well worth your time to read this bloody great story LB
Reviewed it on July 22, 2025
Need editing ex.David or its Kai.Arise
good
Reviewed it on July 16, 2025
Edited version is goodfred7021
Up dated review now worth it!!!
Reviewed it on July 12, 2025
A very much improved story with proper sentence structure and grammer. Reads much better now! * Recommended reading !!! Written in very poor English, poor grammer, very poor sentence structure. I feel that for $6.00 I was cheated out my money. *** At least the author has done (is trying to do) the right thing, and edited, rewrote and made it better! THANK YOU for living up to your word.Thank you for your review. The edited version has been updated.
spankysgang2000
Confusing story
Reviewed it on November 22, 2025
Average. Don't understand why there's so much slapping someone (anyone) in just about every paragraph. Also why everybody (usually in groups) mocks, makes fun of, or down grades MC in every encounter he has. Why does everything cost over $100,000.00 or/and into the Millions?
bob.srq
Did not do my due diligence
Reviewed it on October 9, 2025
The book is way overpriced. In need of an editor
Save your money
Ed
Still needs work
Reviewed it on August 2, 2025
Editing and chapters being divided would help. Couldn't finish.Thanks a lot for the feedback! I hear you—better editing and clearer chapter breaks can really make a difference. I’ll work on that moving forward. Appreciate you giving it a shot!