(18 reviews)
$3.99
Tag
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: All Ages
His first memories of our family are of his mother and father going to work or some social gathering and leaving him with the hired help. We had a maid, cook, and nanny. Tag saw his parents once or twice a week for dinner. Otherwise, the help took care of raising him. He was enrolled in a private school because you couldn’t have a Gallo going to public school.
Tag’s parents and Grandfather never got along. Grandfather never agreed with the way his parents were raising him. Somehow, he got them to agree to let him spend the summers at his ranch. Let me tell you, he loved getting away from his parents and spending time with Gramps. Now, for the rest of the story
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LB
Reviewed it on July 13, 2025
pdydrmr1
This Book has the best editing effort
Reviewed it on July 7, 2025
I just finished reading this book. It has the best editing effort of all the books I have read by this Author. I very good Read.Greg
Decent story, needs editing.
Reviewed it on July 2, 2025
Spelling errors abound. Jumping between 1st and 3rd person within the same sentence detracts from the story. Desperate need of editing.justducky772004
Almost stopped mid book, it actually got better.
Reviewed it on July 15, 2025
Spelling and Grammar checking would make a big difference in the reading of the book. If you take out the daily routine lines it would be a story not a book. Very slow development but the action picked up in chap 19 amp; 20. That's the end, no indication there will be a book 2. Hope it comes sooner than book 2 of "FROM ANOTHER PLANET".craig091101
Middle 70% is boring filler
Reviewed it on July 14, 2025
Cannot recommend. First 10% of the book is the set-up and interesting. Then repetitious, boring filler, with virtually no plot movement. Final 20% has action and a few good plot developments. The specific ending was signaled by the author earlier and so it is an unsurprising cliff-hanger. Editing is as usual mostly non-existent. Wrong words, misspellings, casual (not “causal”) switches from 3rd person to 1st person, misuse of gendered pronouns (“she” for “he” or vice versa), and, fairly annoying, missing negatives. The author in all his books often doesn’t include a negative the context requires. As in, I told him I would go, when the build-up, context, and reaction of the other characters make it clear the MC is saying, I told him I won’t go.cgr71067
Get a damn editor!
Reviewed it on July 2, 2025
Why on earth would the author keep switching between first and third person in the same sentence? Even an AI wouldn't write this bad! That's a shame because the story has potential, but the grammar sours any good impression really quickly!martin.theo974
This could have been a good book, but the writing is horrible.
Reviewed it on July 14, 2025
This could have been a good book, but the writing is horrible.peterbakerthebaker
no substance
Reviewed it on July 8, 2025
if you took out all the getting up at 2am centering and eating breakfast then you might fill 2 paragraphs with story