by Don Carter
Content Rating: Older than 17
When mark's wife leaves for London by train, the last thing he expects is to geta visit from the police informing him that she's been involved in a traffic accident. Things fall apart from then.
Reviewed it on June 8, 2023
Excellent writer who crafted a sad story of how marital cheating does not end well, caught or not.
well written, left abrupt and incomplete ending
Reviewed it on November 16, 2020
over all good story line and pretty well written, good tension building with only a few continuity and context errors the author is capable of moving the plot forward, but left the MC with an unacceptable, abrupt and unfinished ending. I get that the author felt he finished this work but as a patron I feel cheated. I thank the author for the effort but this is not a free story site so with that in mind, unless the author could actually care less about satisfying his readership (in which case why is this story published here instead of a free site) Mr Carter needs to reassess his plan.
I have purchased 3 of this authors stories and will likely rate lower if the other two tales provide no better ending.
I'm afraid that I lost trust
Reviewed it on February 27, 2023
It's going along nicely, I'm trying to work out where we are going next when .......
Yes! That's how it ended. At least, with the free literature sites I would have been warned that it was Unfinished and Incomplete.
Not a happy bunny!