The Lost Emperor

Another one like the other ones

Reviewed it on May 21, 2025

It is a good read. But you have to accept the writer's style. I like all of Wondering Man's stories so I am no doubt biased.

yomundongo

Good fun read

Reviewed it on May 17, 2025

Good story and fun to read! Can’t wait for the follow on continuation of Tan’s development and amazing talents!

pdbertram

Good read

Reviewed it on May 16, 2025

A little repetitive on the day to day morning activities but still entertaining.

apkennedy

Sudden ending

Reviewed it on May 7, 2025

It would be interesting to see where this goes

jsomes

Fun story

Reviewed it on May 6, 2025

Fun story. Is there a sequel?

whunter67

Good story but you have to get used to the writer style. It's ba

Reviewed it on May 6, 2025

Good story but you have to get used to the writer's Style. It's based on a day-to-day happening therefore there's a lot of repetitive because what you do everyday is repetitive. You need to learn to skim through that to see if anything is different and then just move on to the rest of the text. Also doesn't know how to end the story to transition to the next book. But looking forward to reading the next book.

MartyParker1964

Continuity

Reviewed it on May 23, 2025

I have read all of your books and I enjoy them. As CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, I would like to point out a some things that I noticed; There is a lack of continuity in each of the stories where as in the manipulator books, his sensei gave him a chest and you did do anything with what was in there to expand on that part of the storyline. In the Last Emperor what did he do with the weapons and the coins from the cave and why didn't he go to the basement in the garage. These are just some of what I noticed as I read the stories. I enjoyed the books and I am looking forward to the next books. If you want any help or thoughts I would be very glad to help as I am recovering from shoulder surgery and have nothing but time on my hands. There is an opportunity for a couple more books in this series. Thanks Marty martyparker1964@gmail.com

efry298

Good Story

Reviewed it on May 16, 2025

I enjoyed this book and now wish there would be a follow on. This story could branch out in so many different ways. Would like to see the author complete a follow on. Penny4

The Lost Emperor

Reviewed it on May 8, 2025

Excellent storyline,however light on details and continuity.

No ending .

Reviewed it on May 8, 2025

I liked it until it just quit. The story needed to have an ending.

Except for some very receptive paragraph

Reviewed it on May 6, 2025

Except for some very receptive paragraphs such as when Tan goes to sleep and knows whats going on around huim overall a good read and I look forward to the next volume.

pencek

abrupt ending

Reviewed it on May 18, 2025

I think a previous reviewer said it best: "good story, but needs an editor". I would add that it needs a more graceful ending, even if there is a follow on book. Perhaps an edit and a revision upload?

cousins_bryan

To repetitive

Reviewed it on May 5, 2025

Poor or no editing, missing words or misplaced words spoiled some of the work.but mostly the repetitive nature of the work spoils the story

Curmudgeon at Large

Extremely repetitive

Reviewed it on May 8, 2025

While somewhat interesting when something actually happens, there’s way too much cut-and-paste repetition. One sentence was used, verbatim, 17 times in less that 100 pages. The author may be headed in an interesting direction with his story, but the repetition is getting in the way.

jwswaco

Repetition is ridicules!

Reviewed it on May 7, 2025

Repetition ruins this story. Needs major editing and proof reading.