The Manipulator Book 3

LB

Reviewed it on April 18, 2025

OK

david.dland

It's good plot

Reviewed it on April 2, 2025

Needs editor to cut a lot of repetitive sections and correct spelling.

When a proof reader and editor are greatly needed.

Reviewed it on March 30, 2025

You have a great story line in all three books. There are missing words, added words, many misspellings, and names wrong. Your grammar is awful. Hope you can take honest criticism.

maxloosli75

It's looking like a series ...

Reviewed it on March 25, 2025

Usual comments ... I enjoyed it, regardless. Will be waiting for the next part, money in hand ... [Edit] just reread it, and there's a section where a character's name flip-flops between Ashley and Alison almost on a per sentence basis ... get it edited and re-released, for God's sake!

jpursell

Good story, but long winded and repetitve

Reviewed it on April 4, 2025

Good. But repetitive.

crallenpe

interesting storyline hidden in irritating carbon-copy fluff

Reviewed it on March 28, 2025

this book is more than 80% repetitive (literally carbon copy) irritating fluff. Prepare to wear yourself out fast forwarding through the text.

jag.peter.kristiansson

Boring

Reviewed it on March 28, 2025

The same over and over again