(4 reviews)
$4.99
Cat Fight
by Pars001
Categories: Fiction » Science Fiction
Format: EPUB
Content Rating: Older than 13
A man with a lot of bad luck, suddenly finds he is more than he thought. What happens when you combine the military, aliens, some royalty, a dash (or three) of violence, and the military? A science fiction adventure with depth and scale almost beyond imagination!
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geared62
Good story
Reviewed it on June 12, 2024
The editing needs a little more work. Chapter 16 was repeated in the book, and I found a couple of paragraphs were also repeated in chapter 17 (maybe?) from a previous chapter… In any case, I also found that using new units of time and distance is somewhat annoying. While I realize that it is a science fiction book with a setting on an another world, this leads to distraction, especially since the conversions are not whole numbers. I also found a few times where a sentence would be from a personal view point, only to be followed up with a third person perspective at the next sentence. That being said, the premise is interesting, though the storyline could be developed a lot more, as well as the characters. They are very single minded, nearly always focused on the protection of the main character. Still, it’s a tale that ends well.