(9 reviews)
$4.99
The Family Business
by Chuckles the Clown
Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Men's Erotica
Format: EPUB
Content Rating: Extreme Contents
A sexy romp featuring a battle-scarred Marine that returns home hoping to find a place within his troubled family, only to find them enmeshed in a high stakes gamble between the FBI and the Mob! This epic drama is filled with high-energy erotic action. Authored by Chuckles the Clown and presented here by his authorized agent, ahorsewithnoname.
The book is dedicated to a fellow author, Paul, officially known as PabloDiablo, who has not been heard from by the author or the site he frequented and loved, for several years. In declining health, the worst is feared. May the Gods be smiling on him wherever he is and whatever he's doing -- certainly watching Yankee games to be sure!
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Ajmartinjr
Awesome....
Reviewed it on April 6, 2024
Loved this. Would love to see a second one for sure..simon.moody
I enjoyed it
Reviewed it on April 4, 2024
I would have preferred the action to be peppered with the sex, rather than the sex peppered with the plot, still really enjoyed it thoughBlues Brother
Sex,Sex,SEX!!
Reviewed it on March 26, 2024
I really enjoyed this book, it's not so much an erotic novel as it is literary porn. There's enough of a plot to move it along, but the focal theme is sex, and that's what I look for in an erotic story. The sex scenes are graphic and blisteringly vivid. It's easy to read, the author is a good storyteller. I'll buy more of this author's stuff.rat
Plot?
Reviewed it on March 23, 2024
I like a good plot with a little sex, not a lot of sex with very little plot.ah08010-storiesonline
Not enough storying, too much fucking
Reviewed it on March 21, 2024
I'm used to not trusting the covers of the books I read. In this case, there's one part I should have trusted: the checkmarks. The book cover lists US Marines, the FBI, and the Mob with one checkmark each, and Erotica with three checkmarks. That is only correct on a logarithmic scale - there was 1000x more erotica than anything else. And it completely left out the enormous "rah, rah Texas" part. Honestly, I can't recommend the book. The story is barely there. Members of the mob who've been mobbing for decades suddenly become so stupid that their entire way of life falls to pieces trying to scam a recovering alcoholic? Yeah, no. You can't put smart phones and dumb mobsters in the same story. All the dumb ones get taken out early. The whole thing is well-written. There are few glaring errors -- obviously someone is running a spell checker and maybe some advanced tools (AI, or grammar checkers, or something). Or maybe CtClown is just a really good writer, I don't know! So the English isn't going to be a stumbling block. The sex scenes, on the other hand, are a huge stumbling block. They make up about 80 percent of the book, it seems like. Apparently, anal sex is the "Texas handshake" because nobody, except maybe the Mob, can meet a female without immediately going around the world with her. The sad part here is that the "bones" of the story are good. There's a little mystery, some crime, some sex, etc. If the proportions of sex scenes and scooby-doo investigation were reversed, this could make the NYTimes best seller list. There would have to be more clues and investigation, and maybe less hitting the reader over the head with things. But right now, this story is like a "themed" porn video. You know the ones where they pretend to have a plot but break into fucking after 2 minutes? If they had made it to 5 minutes, it would be a whole different story. And get more stars.ferretman61
to much sex to little plot.
Reviewed it on April 23, 2024
Could of been alot better with less sex and more plot. I also felt the ending was a big let down.martin.theo974
It could be à good book
Reviewed it on April 3, 2024
It could be à good book.